[But she's willing to teach. The basics are there, the problem is the experience... he clearly has it if he's struggling to correct the mistakes. They've probably never been pointed out to him before.]
I think it'll be easier to demonstrate.
[She moves so she's stood alongside him, to do just that, so it's near his perspective.]
Like this.
[She swings with precision and accuracy, nothing wasted. All sharp, certain. There's no room for error. It would cause the opposing party to have to defend, rather than to deflect and parry.]
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[But she's willing to teach. The basics are there, the problem is the experience... he clearly has it if he's struggling to correct the mistakes. They've probably never been pointed out to him before.]
I think it'll be easier to demonstrate.
[She moves so she's stood alongside him, to do just that, so it's near his perspective.]
Like this.
[She swings with precision and accuracy, nothing wasted. All sharp, certain. There's no room for error. It would cause the opposing party to have to defend, rather than to deflect and parry.]