[He nods again, taking in that one piece of feedback and keeping it in mind for later. It was a start. If he made any mistakes, surely she'd point them out as they went.
When she gives the signal, he steps back a few to give breathing room, and lunges forward, swinging right to left as he re-closes the distance. There's more than there should be in the swing, and a fair bit of wasted movement -- definitely signs of a lack of refinement.]
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When she gives the signal, he steps back a few to give breathing room, and lunges forward, swinging right to left as he re-closes the distance. There's more than there should be in the swing, and a fair bit of wasted movement -- definitely signs of a lack of refinement.]